• fireweed@lemmy.world
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    8 天前

    For this level of detail, streams of water are going to be easier to portray. Droplets require more detail to be realistic than the rest of the drawing is able to support. I think at this level they look more like lumps, unfortunately.

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    8 天前

    I think if you hadn’t explicitly asked me to consider whether she looks wet, I may not have questioned it. Your question triggered the thought, “what else does it look like”, so now I can’t unsee the blisters.

    I just asked my husband to tell me what he sees and his reply was, “uuh… woman in the rain?” So without any prompting it passes as water.

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      8 天前

      Actually, this is related to something especially beginner (but also more advanced) artists need to learn: don’t point out (what you perceive as) the flaws. If they’re very obvious, your audience will see them, if they’re not, who cares? By pointing them out, you draw attention away from the good parts and you don’t want that.

  • Mark with a Z@suppo.fi
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    8 天前

    To me it sits somewhere between water droplets and a disease. I don’t have the kind of expertise to tell what exactly makes it wrong, but maybe try messing with shading inside the droplet.

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  • Ricky Rigatoni@piefed.zip
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    8 天前

    If the droplets were more vertically oblong like they were running down her face it would look a lot gooderly.

  • ZERONOVABLOSSOM@sh.itjust.works
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    8 天前

    Looks like boils or pimples but I can see what you’re trying to do. You’ve got the sense of how water tends to lighten whats under it, and how theres shadows around the droplets to give it definition.

    Positioning and refinement of the shine on droplets is important I’d say. Theres almost always a clearly visible shine on droplets like that. Water also reflects the background quite a bit so I would expect these particular droplets to have harsh shadows due to the hair and background being dark/black.

    Also water/rain doesn’t really clump in distinct bubbles unless its on a still flat surface. It tends to be one big round shape… so the clumps of water on the bottom right look off. That amount of water is more likely to disturb the surface tension of the droplets and run down her chin in a curved line, maybe even begin the process of falling from her.

    Her hair being wet also makes me feel like there should be more water running down her face from the scalp. Stray hairs would stick to her face though you do have a bit of this here, honestly hair is pretty good… Water around her eyebrows would get a bit absorbed into the hairs… Eyelashes are pretty good at maintaining beads of water…

    Articulating how water works into words is hard… I would suggest getting a spray bottle and spritzing your arm with some water and taking pictures in different lighting to get a sense of how it works. Maybe even add a bit of skin safe water based dye to see if different colours help you see the shadows and reflections more clearly.

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    8 天前

    I think you have most of the elements in place and it looks pretty good already.

    If you want advice on how you could improve it… I just sketched this, each drop should have lighting similar to this. Sharp bright white reflection of where the light is hitting it at the top, directly under that, (still at the top) you have a subtle blurry shadow. At the bottom you have a blurry subtle highlight, then under you have the shadow being cast by the drop.

    All of those elements will look different depending on the size/shape/angle of the drop, angle of the lighting, whether a shadow would block lighting etc.

    Look at lots of reference images to compare different conditions to get an idea of how the light in the drops behaves :)

  • Coolcoder360@lemmy.world
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    8 天前

    I think the biggest thing I notice is that there are adjacent droplets that are touching, that you’ve painted as two separate drops/spheres.

    But when water drops touch in real life they combine because of the surface tension, so any two drops that are touching shouldn’t exist but instead just be one bigger droplet.

  • BartyDeCanter@piefed.social
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    8 天前

    Yes and no. The highlights are good, particularly in the hair, lips, and nose. But only some of the droplets are shaped like they are being pulled down by gravity and have highlights, while most are just kinda blotchy.

  • XeroxCool@lemmy.world
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    8 天前

    Throwing in my incompetent 2 cents: the hair looks good and helps. But for the drops themselves, maybe there’s too many, they’re too unaligned with gravity, and too spherical/uniform. I’m not inclined to do an acne commercial demo right now, but I feel like not much water forms in droplets before skin gets moistened and breaks the beading ability. Sorta like you need more subtle streaks and fewer droplets. The light refraction should also be asymmetrical. I guess lighter on the bottoms, but not sure

    But as discussed many times before, your ability is far above what I possess so this is all meant as constructive postulations. I really enjoy the overall coloring and shading

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    8 天前

    Good effort. I think the shadow and light in the drop should be a little more crescent shaped near the edges. That’s a lot of detail though for those tiny spots, so that is tough here.

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    8 天前

    A. You have far more experience painting than I do.
    B. I think what is wrong is that they are not drop shaped, most of the mass should sit on the bottom and be held up my surface tension. This looks more like water would on a horizontal flat surface.

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      8 天前

      You’re right. I’m trying to do droplets without painting each one individually in great detail. I’m clearly not there yet.