‘A sentence should not have more than ten or twelve words.’ VS Naipaul’s first rule for good writing is a popular one. From Hemingway’s legion of admirers, to Grammarly, to countless books and internet memes about writing well, the idea that shorter sentences are better is dominant. Many people go further, arguing that one of the most important changes in English over time is its sentences getting shorter.

This has been a standard modern academic account of English prose, from Edwin H Lewis’s 1894 book The History of the English Paragraph to recent dataset analyses. Arjun Panickssery recently argued that English sentences got shorter over time and that ‘shorter sentences reflect better writing’.

The Elizabethans and Victorians wrote long tangled sentences that resembled the briars growing underneath Sleeping Beauty’s tower. Today we write like Hemingway. Short. Sharp. Readable. Pick up an old book and the sentences roll on. Go to the office, read the paper, or scroll Twitter and they do not. So it is said. I would like to suggest that this account is incomplete.

I propose a different story. The great shift in English prose took place in the sixteenth and seventeenth centuries, probably driven by the increasing use of writing in commercial contexts, and by the style of English in post-Reformation Christianity. It consisted in two things: a ‘plain style’ and logical syntax. A second, smaller shift has taken place in modern times, in which written English came to be modeled more closely on spoken English.

What this should demonstrate is that shortness is the wrong dimension to investigate. We think we are looking at a language that got simpler; in fact we are looking at one that has created huge variation in what it can express and how, by adding new ways of writing. Lots of English writing has got simpler through use of the plain style, sticking to a logical shared syntax, especially the syntax of speech. But all the other ways of writing are still there, often showing up when we don’t expect them.

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    26 days ago

    It seems as though the researchers picked their targets – not uncommon – but completely avoided the implications of texting and shortform like tweets, in addition to the increasing international use of English, where messages will be better understood with simple structure.

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      26 days ago

      English had become much more concise before tweets/social media even existed.

      Reading a book from 1850, then reading a book from 1950, a mere 100 years later, will yeild two very different reading experiences. Of course modern English has become even shorter, but this is a centuries long change that’s occurred.

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        26 days ago

        But a book for what sort of audience? Are you saying James Joyce is approachable on account of his short sentences?

        This strikes me more as a shift in reading habits; after all, you write for your audience. In academia and longform media outlets, that calls for lugubrious, wandering sentences. In other situations, you basically end up with Dick and Jane.

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    26 days ago

    “Examples of prose, past and present, illustrate that short prose isn’t always modern, that long sentences aren’t always difficult to read, and that short sentences aren’t always easy.”

    As a “wordy” writer who misses the popularity of the semi-colon, I love this quote from the article.

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    23 days ago

    When writing work emails, I’ve learned to use short sentences and each thought has its own line. Is like writing to a 6 year old, but I do it so everyone can easily understand it.

    Also, I have ADHD, so writing and receiving short, clear sentences are better for me to track and understand.