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This chapter was boring, but looks like the next one will be full of action.
I can see your point, but I think it fits in the pacing of explaining things around. I am pretty sure that if you had chapters back to back you wouldn’t think this way. 😊
My problem is not with the pacing. Almost half of the chapter was just visuals of their journey to the fort, without a single speech bubble. They definitely could have handled it better.
Oh, I see what you mean. I personally still prefer this over Game of Thrones teleportation, but I guess that’s just me.
