StreetSoul
Black & white street photography. Leica M10 Monochrom + Ricoh GR IV Monochrome. Street, shadow, patience, imperfect light. streetsoul.me
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StreetSoul@lemmy.worldOPtoPhotography@lemmy.world•[Critique Wanted] Does the foreground crowd carry this frame or choke it?English
2·20 days agoThanks, that matches what I was testing: the guide and the painting as a shared subject, with the audience acting as a frame. I agree about the painting needing a little more headroom; the top edge feels tight.
StreetSoul@lemmy.worldOPtoPhotography@lemmy.world•[Critique Wanted] Does the foreground crowd carry this frame or choke it?English
2·20 days agoFair point. ‘Behind the crowd’ may be the problem here. I wanted the foreground blockage to pull the viewer into the audience, but if it reads more like a barrier, then the frame starts choking itself.
StreetSoul@lemmy.worldOPtoPhotography@lemmy.world•[Critique Wanted] Does the foreground crowd carry this frame or choke it?English
2·20 days agoThanks for taking the time to crop it. The portrait crop is cleaner, but I think it loses some of the pressure between the guide, the painting and the audience. The second crop gets closer to what I was trying to test: the guide sitting inside the crowd rather than being isolated from it.
StreetSoul@lemmy.worldOPtoPhotography@lemmy.world•[Critique Wanted] Does the foreground crowd carry this frame or choke it?English
2·20 days agoThanks, this is really useful. I was thinking of it less as a portrait and more as a street/museum scene where the guide, the painting and the audience all compete a bit. Your point about the crowd framing the guide without taking over is close to what I was hoping for. The flatter angle may be the real limitation here.
StreetSoul@lemmy.worldtoStreet photography @lemmy.world•Toronto, Ontario, CanadaEnglish
1·20 days agoThe backlight and silhouettes give the street a dense rhythm without needing to show too much detail.
The diagonal light does a lot here, cutting through the heavy concrete and keeping the frame from going flat
The leading lines and hard shadows give the empty walkway a strong, unforced rhythm.

That makes sense. I usually like the foreground a little too present, but more separation or blur could stop it from becoming a wall. Useful point.