• digger@lemmy.ca
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    2 years ago

    I appreciate that you included sections of the relevant privacy policies. I like your approach.

    Please run what you write through spell check. You misspelled: extremely, business, advertisers, educated, and default. The word October could be capitalized, but as part of a hypothetical search query, it could be lower case on purpose.

    Lastly, Qwant is struck through in your last sentence. It’s unclear if you chose that formatting because you don’t recommend it (as stated earlier) or for some other reason.

    Keep writing! We need more of this!

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      2 years ago

      Oh yikes. Those are egregious spelling errors hahaha. Thank you for reading and the feedback!

      Yes, I struckthrough Qwant since they are sending your IP to Microsoft with every search. :)

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        2 years ago

        It might be worth throwing in something at the bottom of the page explaining why you struck it through.

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          2 years ago

          Done. Thanks for the recommendation.