Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 5 months agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up1312arrow-down111
arrow-up1301arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 5 months agomessage-square20fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down1·5 months agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down13·edit-25 months agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddhlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-25 months agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down6·5 months agoThank you captain obvious.
minus-squareddhlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·5 months agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·edit-25 months agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.