• @Valmond@lemmy.world
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      1 month ago

      Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.

      You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?

      • ddh
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        1 month ago

        Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.

          • ddh
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            31 month ago

            So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?